This is a great flash despite your problems. I sincerely appreciate your work on it. The animation gave a nice view of what you were trying to get through on the song. It makes me want to take the next step too.
The drawing of the samurai was subpar. The fact that it was just the same thing over and over kinda killed it. I have a feeling you could do a lot more with the song you had. If it was an actual song, might make a good music video. Revamp it and Good Luck w/ future
But the important thing here is, if I could do a lot more wouldnt I have done it?
Very,very well done.
Your submission is among the best i have ever seen. A very nice take on the age old tale of little red riding hood. The graphics were superb. They made the story all the more real. The sound played well with the storyline. Thank you for this great submission.
wow....i savior again.
once again i am the savior....that animation for being the savior is actually really cool.
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that was hilarious
This is definately front page worthy. One of the funniest flash i've seen in a long time. Extremely well done with just the right mix of humor and seriousness.
...But why'd you stop? It says to keep going.... damnit. ok get back up you're doing it again.
gluck and again i thank you for submitting this.
Hey, thanks! And you're welcome.
what the hell? that is a waste of 8 hours 30 minutes
no animation. just a song and clips. going for the sympathy vote like so many others right now. I really disaprove of that.
music keeps going if you click on burst again. sides that nice work.
1)when you draw in 1 point perspective, even the tops of the buildings are supposed to be angling towards the vanishing point.
2) i liked the part where you had the crossed lines become solid straight ones, that could really give you a nice transition into some other scene.
3) music was pretty good for this, seemed moderately synched, don't know if you meant to do that or not.
4) the fighter character doesn't need to have so much detail drawn into him, sometimes if you put less, the look a lot better.
other than that it was decent. gluck on future works.
for a first flash, very nice. definately a lot of messing around with the background.
Thanks..yeah but i didnt have a idea so i was just kame up somthing there :P
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